Variety News & WIP Reports 5/30/09
Sunday, May 31, 2009
This week on The Variety Pages:
Tues. & Friday: Lana and Brad have a lot of thinking to do. Will they begin to reconcile?
Wednesday: A lucky contestant will win a book and a tin of tea for May's photo contest.
Thursday: Rugs & flooring in this week's Wonders & Blunders.
Elsewhere on the Variety Network:
Nail Art Tuesday gets the blues.
WIP Reports
Short Story Challenge: I really blew this one. I focused far too much on trying to write something "marketable", instead of just writing. This whole challenge actually made me question whether I should even be writing short stories at all, since I've always preferred novels. After much reading and soul-searching, I've decided that I do want to write short stories, but more for practice and free to low-cost distribution, rather than anything more serious. So I've started a project that I've been ruminating on for years (literally) - a collection of stand-alone short stories with a common theme that could be bundled together later. I may try submitting them, and I may not...the point is just to hone & tighten my writing skills, so no pressure to actually do anything with them. I'd like to write one per month for six months to complete the collection. I started the first one, Rainy Sunday, last night. My goal is to have a complete 5,000 word draft done by next weekend.
Blog novel: I realized this weekend that now that I've broken Brad & Lana up, they have to get back together (it is a romance after all). How and why is that going to happen? I have no idea, but I'm working on it!
AW Summer Challenge: Yes, I am a glutton for punishment. Why do you ask? I've accepted the Summer writing challenge over on Absolute Write, and thus have started a new romantic comedy novel, My Private Chef, to be finished by Sept. 1st (the rough draft, anyways). Should be a good book and a good challenge, I'm enjoying writing it so far.
Novel editing/rewrite: I did mark up several more pages of Perfect Companions this week. And I realized that it's suffering from a serious identity crisis. It's got both mystery and romance elements in it, but not a good enough mixture to be labeled both, and not enough of one to exclude the other. The writing is pretty sound technically, but it's all over the place as far as the plot is concerned. So I've decided it needs a complete rewrite - and you'll note that I removed the deadline. I'd hoped to edit/revise it enough for submitting next fall, but a complete rewrite may take longer with my other projects to consider. We'll see how it goes.
So, lots of stuff in the works - we'll see how the week goes! Anyone else have goals to share this week (non-writing goals welcome too)?
Weekly Reading List 5/24 – 5/30/09
Saturday, May 30, 2009
Ebooks:
Wyoming Wedding by Sara Orwig (Harlequin Silhouette Desire - also available in print)
This is the third in a trilogy - the others are Dakota Daddy and Montana Mistress. Three cousins trying to "out earn" each other over the course of a year, and all three manage to entangle women in their plans. They're enjoyable, if not entirely believable, and nice quick reads.
The Bride Hunter by Ann Major (Harlequin Silhouette Desire - also available in print)
I always like whatever I read from Ann, and this one was no different. The poor heroine is so confused, lost, and wants so much to trust and belong, but she just can't due to her sordid past. She's complex and adorable, and Connor, the hero is patient, frustrated, and the perfect over-protective male. Excellent book, and very enjoyable. There's another book about the heroine's twin – The Throw-Away Bride, I believe.
And that's it for this week! I'm starting The Prodigal Prince's Seduction by Olivia Gates (ebook) and The Broken Window by Jeffery Deaver (paperback) this weekend. Looking forward to both!
Storytime: Loving Lana, Chapter 17
Friday, May 29, 2009
Previous Chapter
"The wedding is off." Brad addressed the waiting group, leaving the door open as he strode through to the bedroom. Silence prevailed as he grabbed his bag, then headed back towards the front door. He stopped in front of the judge.
"Susan will see that you get the full fee - I'm sorry for the trouble." He turned to Darren. "Watch your back," he warned, noting that Sandra had gone. Probably to be with Lana. "These ladies aren't what they seem."
"I'm quite aware of that," Darren said solemnly. He held out a business card. "Give me a call sometime - I get the feeling we have something in common." Brad nodded, then walked out, noting Lana and Sandra looking over the river as he pulled away from the cabin, anger and loss weighing heavily on his mind.
It was over now though. Lana wiped her cheeks, taking a deep breath and letting it out slowly. Warm fingers gently squeezed her shoulder, and for a moment, she hoped.
"I'm so sorry," Sandra said, pulling her into a hug. "I'm so very sorry."
Lana leaned on her friend, closing her eyes. "It's not your fault," she said huskily, pulling away. "You were right. It wasn't fair to use him like that. But..."
"But you loved him."
Lana nodded, wiping away fresh tears. "I wanted to be strong, to take something from him, like he took my dreams from me. But I can't," she said, glancing up as an engine started nearby. "I just can't be that person." She watched as Brad drove out of her life, probably for good this time.
"Maybe he's not that person either anymore," Sandra said quietly. "I hope not, because he knows enough now to shut us down." She grabbed Lana's hand, pulling her towards the cabin. "Come on. Darren and I will give you a ride home."
Lana snuffled. "How are things going with Darren? Are you two--"
"I really don't want to talk about him," Sandra said as they reached the door. She squeezed Lana's hand. "Let's just get this over with, okay? Plenty of time for gossip later."
This is the first draft of a novel I'm working on. Comments always welcome. Thanks for reading!
Wonders & Blunders: Henna Hair Dye & Crystal Deodorant
Thursday, May 28, 2009
I was never all that concerned about the gray hair turning up on my head until three people actually pointed it out. In one week. It wasn’t pretty.
So, being completely paranoid about all the chemicals in regular hair dye, I decided to try natural dyes. The first one was henna and a bunch of other herbs – made my head itch for two days afterwards. So I let it all grow out, and then tried it again with a mixture of just henna and indigo (I’m a brunette – straight henna would turn my hair red, which is not what I’m going for). Again, itchy head. I gave up for a long time.
But as it always does, the gray hair was creeping up on me again. I don’t know why, I’m only 34, but the salt & pepper thing gets wearisome. So last weekend, I decided to give it one more shot. I bought a box of Light Mountain Natural – and I got the “Cover the Gray” formula before realizing it was for more than 10% gray hair (no, I don’t have *that* much gray!). But I decided to try it anyways, since it was a two-step process, slightly different than the others.
Henna-based dyes are all pretty much the same – you mix up the powdered leaves with water, then let it sit for an hour or so. Cover your hair with it, heat it at intervals to set the color, and be very careful not to dye your face, neck or hands orange. Rinse and you’re done, smelling much like an alfalfa field. The color cures (changes) over the next couple of days.
So Saturday night, I locked myself in the bathroom and set about covering the grays. It did a good job, but I was just waiting for the itching to set in the next day. I know, test first, but I’m kind of impatient with things like that. I live dangerously sometimes.
My head never started itching.
Now to be honest, I can’t be certain whether it’s the actual dye ingredients (same ingredients in the last dye I used, red henna, neutral henna and indigo), the method of using the red henna first, then the indigo after (instead of all at once), or the fact that I’ve stopped using chemical-laden shampoos, so there’s no chemical residue for the plants to interact with. The fact is, my head didn’t itch, my grays are mostly covered (or they look like blond highlights in spots – I added vinegar for that effect), and it wasn’t all that expensive ($10, and I could have just used half the box).
So here’s to naturally covered grays, and no irritation. And people not pointing out other people’s gray hairs.
Blunder: Crystal Deodorant
I’m always looking for personal care products with less or no chemicals. Call me paranoid, but I’m constantly worried that I’ll “give” myself cancer (ironically, food doesn’t worry me as much as it should – I do love sugar and animal fats). I’m starting to run out of solid deodorant and decided to try one of the crystal rock thingy’s that crunchy green people all over the ‘net are talking about. I paid too much money for it.
It doesn’t work for me. I had body odor just a couple hours after applying it, for a week. That’s the problem with everyone having different chemistry, I think. I tried baking soda, but that was irritating after awhile (and messy).
I bought my husband some Toms of Maine deodorant (made from hops and herbs), and he seems to like it. Maybe I’ll try that next…
What Is It?
Wednesday, May 27, 2009
Congrats to the three of you who guessed last week - everyone was correct, it was bark mulch from my garden, shown above. That makes 7 entries into the drawing this month - only one more week to go!Here's this week's mystery photo:
To enter: Simply post a comment with your best guess as to what the subject of the photo is. Each correct answer = 1 drawing entry. Drawings held at the end of each month. Prizes include a book and a tin of tea.
Storytime: Loving Lana, Ch. 16
Tuesday, May 26, 2009
He was about to break the uncomfortable silence when Sandra and Lana came out of the kitchen. Both women were solomn, and as Lana looked into his eyes, guilt reflected deep within.
"We need to talk," she said, her voice low. Brad pulled her aside, leaning closer.
"After the wedding, like we agreed, right?" he murmered.
"No. You should know this first. It's...ah...it's only fair." She looked up briefly, addressing thier guests. "I'm sorry - just give us a few more minutes, please."
"Don't worry about it," Susan said. "Take all the time you need."
Brad followed Lana out the front door, closing it gently behind him. They walked to a rustic wooden bench overlooking the creek that flowed a few yards away.
"You don't need to do this," Brad said. "I'm willing to wait. I trust you, Lana." He took her hand in his, lifting her chin with the other. Tears shimmered and she blinked as he gently traced the side of her face.
"It's not just about why we broke up," she started. "But you deserve to know that too. This is about something I do - something I'm a part of. Something you might not want to be a part of, even by marriage."
Brad frowned. What could she possibly do that would hurt him?
"I had a miscarriage." Lana's voice caught and she took a quick breath. Brad wished she would look at him, but she kept her eyes on the river. "That day that Susan saw me - it was a check-up, to make sure things were okay...after...and they told me I'd never be able to have kids."
"Why didn't you tell me?" Brad put a hand on Lana's shoulder, intending to pull her close. She shrugged him off.
"You made it very clear that you didn't want kids. I was going to tell you after dinner that night. But then..."
"I know," Brad said, his voice breaking. "I...this doesn't change anything. I still want to marry you."
"Just let me finish," Lana said, swiping at the tears on her cheeks. "You also need to know that Martin Interiors isn't just Sara's business. You asked how many stockholders there are - and the answer is three. Sara, Sandra and me. We all hold equal shares in the businesses. Sara just runs the day-to-day aspects of them."
"Them?" Brad shifted, rubbing his sweaty palms on his jeans. "There's more than one business?"
"Two," Lana confirmed, finally looking straight at him. "You've heard of The Weekly Business Report?"
"No...that's...you can't be serious." Brad slumped back against the bench, stunned. That's where he had seen Anderson's business name before. The Weekly Business Report was basically an anonymous gossip rag. Only instead of reporting on celebrities and alien abductions, they spread rumors and sensitive information about businesses that might not be on the up-and-up. His company had never been featured, thank god, but many other good companies had to fend off investigations started by the business tabloid.
"But why?" he asked, feeling dazed. It was too much to process all at once.
"Because the consumer has a right to know." Lana's chin came up defiantly, her eyes flashing. "We check our information very thoroughly, to insure that what we report is accurate. Good businesses have nothing to worry about. We provide a service..."
"You provide a means to run businesses that make a few mistakes into the ground." Brad stood, running a hand through his hair as he sighed. "I can't be associated with something like that," he said quietly. "You know I can't risk the potential ramifications to my company if your identity ever gets out."
Variety News & WIP Reports 5/24/09
Sunday, May 24, 2009
I'm going to keep Mondays "open" for now - meaning no post on Monday unless I have something extra-special-groovy to share with y'all (or unless I find another topic that requires less time, and interests me more).
Elsewhere around the network:
Nail Art Tuesday features a yin-yang design.
Tea on Tap is on hold, I'm afraid. I can write more, or blog more, not both. I'm choosing to write for now.
Scaryview Cemetery discusses early planning and save-the-date magnets.
WIP Reports:
Short Story - Seducing the Moon: I'm pretty sure I know where it's going, just not exactly how to get there. Lack of preparation, I think. And honestly, since I'm doing it as part of a challenge, I think I'm putting too much pressure on myself to do it "right" the first time, instead of banging out the first draft and fixing later. Goal for this week: quit over-thinking it, and just get the first draft done!
Blog Novel - Loving Lana: I'm hoping that one of our three collaborators will tell *me* what they're up to before I have to write the next installment tomorrow night! I have a few clues, but still nothing concrete. Goal for this week: figure out what the girls are up to, and whether it's going to be a deal-breaker, or make the wedding more important for Lana & Brad.
Novel Editing - Perfect Companions: I got a few more pages marked up last weekend, and haven't gotten back to it since. I wish I'd printed it double spaced, but can't bring myself to print it out using double the paper (180 pages?). Busy week, but I need to get moving on it! Goal for this week: Mark up 20 more pages.
Non-writing: I finally got my hair cut, and even spent several hours henna-dying it on Saturday night to cover the gray. I've been trying to remember to schedule a hair cut for 2 weeks, so hooray that's finally done!
Anyone else care to share your goals for the week?
Weekly Reading List 5/16 – 5/23/09
Saturday, May 23, 2009
Broken Souls by Bonnie Vanak (Silhouette Nocturne Bites ebook)
Broken Souls is a heart-wrenching story of a werewolf woman torn between finding her family and the werewolf man who loves her. It's very emotional with lots of tension...excellent quick read.
Racing the Moon by Michele Hauf (Silhouette Nocturne Bites ebook)
This story explores the irresistible attraction between a "familiar" (woman/cat shifter) and a werewolf, with a little trouble with demons thrown in. The heroine is sarcastic and witty, and the hero the perfect guy to help her out with a little problem she struggles with. Another excellent read!
Plot Outline Mini-Course from Holly Lisle
I signed up for Holly's free plot outline mini-course, and read through the short .pdf file, then read it again. There is so much great information in her offerings - I was blown away by how much it helped me just in an hour. I plan on buying her full courses after payday, so more comments on those coming soon.
Fast Women by Jennifer Crusie
Nell is a wreck. Fortunately, so is the detective she goes to work for in this hilarious romantic comedy. It's been out for several years - my sister brought it over a couple weeks ago, and I decided it would be perfect light bedtime reading this week. I love Jennifer Crusie - she has such a talent for comedic writing, and her characters always grow so much throughout the book. Wonderful, fun read, and I'll offer this as a prize option for this month's "What Is It?" drawing.
Ripping the Bodice by Inara Lavey (Ravenous Romance ebook)
One of the advantages to being on Twitter is that businesses often offer specials and freebies to followers. Last week I caught a "tweet" advertizing a free ebook on the Ravenous Romance site - if you could find the book based on thier clues, you got it free for that day. Of course I couldn't pass that up, and this was the free book!
It's hilarious - if you like reading romance, you'll both identify with and thoroughly enjoy this book. It's 4.99 - a reasonable price, in my opinion. Ravenous Romance only publishes romance ebooks, and I've already bought another book from them "The Toast Bitches" by Sandra Cormier. I have a feeling they'll be getting a lot of business from me - very high class, from what I've seen.
That's all for now - what are you reading this week?
Storytime: Loving Lana, Ch. 14 & 15
Thursday, May 21, 2009
After a quiet dinner of lasagna and salad, Lana got her portfolio out of her bag, and sat down with Brad in the cozy living room of the cabin. He'd started a fire to take the chill off, but she pulled a plaid throw over her lap anyways, tucking her feet up into the plush armchair she'd chosen.
"I thought maybe we could go over a few things, since we have some time to kill." Lana opened the folder, and cocked a pen, holding it ready. She held Brad's gaze for a moment, expecting him to object. He simply watched her, and Lana tried to ignore the thick tension building in the space between them. She looked down at her scribbled notepad, her cheeks heating as she tried to make sense of her perfectly logical notes.
"I...uh...I have some ideas for replacement greenery at your offices..."
A dark shadow fell across the page she was trying to read, and Lana looked up, briefly confused at how Brad had moved so quietly. He reached out and slowly took the folder from her lap, holding out his other hand for her pen. She glanced at it, knowing that the rest of the night hinged on her willingness to give it up. He waited silently while she made up her mind.
Lana dropped the pen into Brad's outstretched hand. He turned and set her things on the end table, then held out his hands again, this time for her. Lana took them without hesitation, feeling only brief pang of guilt as he pulled her up into his arms. She melted against his hard warmth, nuzzling her nose into his neck, and placing tiny kisses where his pulse beat hard at his throat. He groaned, then took a step back. Lana stepped forward, but he took another step back, and she stopped.
"I'm sorry...uh...wow...I..." Lana stuttered, feeling the heat creep up her face. She bit her lower lip, looking down at the coffee table. She'd really misread the situation, it seemed, and she wasn't sure how to proceed. A soft touch on her arm brought her attention back to Brad, who was standing there grinning.
Grinning? This was funny? Adrenaline washed through and Lana frowned, opening her mouth for a good lecture. Brad held up both hands, surrendering as he backed away slowly.
"Don't shoot," he said, lowering one hand and reaching out to her. Lana just glared at it, unwilling to put her feelings on the line again. "I just thought maybe we could relocate," he said, his fingers moving over her fist, gently prying it open and tugging her forward. "You know - to a room with a bed, maybe?" He winked.
Lana allowed herself to be pulled forward, feeling shaky from the emotional roller coaster she'd just been on. Did he even realize what he did to her? How he affected her mental state? She followed him down the hall and into the bedroom, both agitated and aroused. [Bedroom scene intentionally left out.]
Lana was pouring a cup of coffee in the galley kitchen the next morning when someone knocked at the door.
"Good morning Susan, Judge Riley. Come in." Brad's voice carried through the thin walls, and Lana got two more cups out of the cupboard, filling each with hot coffee. She put them on wooden cutting board with the sugar bowl, creamer and her own cup, and carried them out to the living room.
"Good morning," she said, placing the tray on the coffee table. "We have coffee, if you'd like some."
"Perfect Lana - we brought donuts." Susan pointed to the box on the table. "Your other witness is on the way. She should be here within the hour, and then we can get you two married." Lana forced herself not to glance at Brad. After all they had shared last night, she was still confused about the status of thier relationship. She smiled at Susan, and opened the box of donuts. Would anyone notice her hands were shaking?
"Thank you for arranging all this, Susan." Brad took a glazed donut and sat on the couch with his coffee to eat. "Who did you get for the other witness?"
Susan shrugged nonchalantly, taking her time to swallow a bite of donut, then follow with a sip of coffee. "Just a friend of Lana's," she said, quickly taking another bite. Lana frowned at her, then glanced at the judge. He was apparently oblivious, enjoying his own breakfast. Susan sipped her coffee again, and Lana raised her eyebrows pointedly.
"Not Sara," Susan clarified. "Someone who's been a little preoccupied lately, but wanted to show her support."
Lana pondered for a moment. She only really had two close friends, and Sara was one. The other one was busy working with another high profile client...
"Sandra!" Lana smiled broadly. "Thank you Susan. But how did you know?" Lana had been friends with Sandra since high school, and still considered her the best friend she'd ever had. With Sandra busy working the Anderson case, and this whole Brad thing, Lana hadn't had a change to talk to her in days, when they normally chatted daily.
"I know a lot of things, dear." Susan winked, and Lana's smile faded. She knew everything - Lana felt it as she looked into the other woman's eyes. Yet she must have kept quiet, otherwise Brad would already know. Not that it mattered now. He would know in just a few hours anyways.
A car door slammed outside, snapping Lana to attention. She jumped up and ran to the door, opening it just in time to see Sandra step out of the passenger side of a navy blue classic Mustang. A tall blond man was helping her out, and Lana ran out to meet them.
"Sandra - I'm so glad you're here!" Lana hugged her friend. "You look wonderful - and nice ride."
Sandra looked uncomfortable, her eyes flicking briefly over Lana's shoulder. Lana turned, offering her hand and a smile to the stranger.
"I'm Lana Anderson," she said, noting the firm grip of his hand. "And you are?"
"Darrin...uh...Anderson," he replied politely, his gaze wandering back to Sandra. "I hope you don't mind that I came," he said.
"No, of course not," Lana said. "Come on in, both of you. We can get this wedding started, now that you're here." They walked up to the cabin, where everyone else waited. Lana made the introductions.
"So then, should we get started?" Lana's voice was a little too bright, and she felt her face flush.
"Lana, can I talk to you for a minute first?" Sandra spoke up, and all eyes turned towards her. "In private," she clarified, walking towards the kitchen. Lana followed, unsure of whether she was irritated or relieved. Maybe both. Sandra leaned against the counter, her expression serious.
"You don't have to do this," she said softly. "Sara and I can handle it. If I'd known what was going on --"
"We've all been a little busy lately," Lana said from the doorway. "But it's okay, Sandra - I want to do this. Not just for the company, but for me. For Brad and me."
"Did you tell him what happened?" Sandra asked. "Does he know what we really do?"
"Not yet." Lana looked down at the floor, rubbing the toe of her shoe against the wooden planks. "But I will - as soon as we're married."
"That's not fair, Lana. You have to tell him now, before this goes any further." Sandra's disappointment hung heavy between them.
I know - I lied. I promised a wedding scene this week...and wrote two more chapters just trying to reach it. But first drafts are like that, I just have to roll with them, and see how things play out. We'll get there eventually (I think)!
Wonders & Blunders: Netbooks & Digital Converter Boxes
Wonder: Netbooks!
I've watched computers "evolve" my whole life, including the first portable computers (my dad still has a chunky "Osborne" computer we used to play space invaders on). When modern laptops came out, I wasn't impressed. To me, a truly portable computer or "lap top" computer should be very light, very small, and not require a large bag and good muscle tone to carry around.
Needless to say, I never succumbed to the laptop craze. When I got the job I have now, the current webmaster used a laptop - I asked for (and received) a desktop model with an ergonomic keyboard. I still work on a desktop, and up until this month, have used a desktop at home.
When I first saw mini-computers at Costco, my immediate comment was, "Finally, a 'real' laptop!" Small, sexy, and ultra-portable, I knew that my time had finally come. I went home, and started doing research into this new class of computer. I wanted something that could be my "main" computer, so disk space, memory and battery life were all extremely important.
I read hundreds of spec sheets and reviews before finally deciding on the Samsung NC10 Netbook. It had decent hard drive space (160gb), upgradable memory to 2 gb, and at least 6-7 hours of battery life - the longest of any netbook on the market. When I got my paycheck, I ordered a lovely blue one online (a saga in and of itself, but I finally got one).
It took me about a day to fall in love with this little machine.
It's absolutely perfect for my needs. Plenty of room for my writing projects (and writing software), photos (and Paint Shop Pro editing software), and anything else I might need. It's comfortable to use on my lap in the living room (where I'm typing this now), leaving room on my lap desk for a mouse if I so choose. The keyboard is comfortable, not too small, and easy to type on. If I want to take it somewhere, it's light and small enough that the case is only slightly larger than my handbag (if I used a larger purse, I could stick it in there). The screen is matte, so I can use it outside in sunlight, and it would fit just fine on an airplane tray. The WiFi works very well with our router, so I'm connected all around the house.
I surf, I write, I blog, I edit photos - all on this little netbook. It's wonderful, and I can't imagine life without it now!
Blunders: Digital Converter Box
We are some of the last hold-outs with regards to cable TV. Aside from the fact that we don't need anymore shows to watch (our TV schedule is so full, we occasionally have to tape one channel while watching another), cable TV is way overpriced, in my opinion. We won't be signing up anytime soon.We also have older analog TV sets (you know, back when they were square?). They work fine, and newer TV's are overpriced too. Not to mention the fact that we'd have to buy new furniture to accomodate a rectangular TV. A pricy proposition. So with those two things against us, we had to buy converter boxes for our TV's before the switch to all digital signals happens.
We signed up for our government coupons, got them and a couple more from family, and bought the boxes (in the photo - the dark one on top). Hubby and I are both pretty savvy when it comes to electronics, but it still took us awhile to figure out how to hook up the box so we'd be able to record TV through our VCR. Then we had to figure out how to use the analog pass-through feature so we could still watch MontanaPBS (which hasn't gone digital here yet).
Our boxes work, but we've gone backwards. If we want to tape something, we have to have the box on that channel - which means if we're taping two channels while we're out, two TV/VCR's have to be programmed. If I want to tape something and watch something else, I have to tape downstairs and watch up here (or vice versa). And we have one more remote to keep track of too.
Perhaps we could have avoided these problems if we'd bought a nicer model - but then again, we won't spend money on cable, why would we spend money on a pricy converter box? It's a pain in the butt, and I sometimes wonder if this whole thing isn't just a huge ploy to force people to buy those new expensive TV's and sign up for cable. I'm sure eventually we'll give in to the new TV, but until cable is ala cart, we'll muddle through happily with our 7 channels.
And I guess I'll get more exercise running up and down the stairs to program the second VCR/digital converter box.
What Is It?
Wednesday, May 20, 2009

This week, another common item found around many homes:
To enter: Simply post a comment with your best guess as to what the subject of the photo is. Each correct answer = 1 drawing entry. Drawings held at the end of each month. Prizes include a book and a tin of tea.
Storytime: Loving Lana, Ch. 13
Tuesday, May 19, 2009
"Come this way, dear." As soon as Lana stepped through the door, Susan motioned her to the side. "Brad filled me in. If you'll take your hat off - it is darling, but you don't want anyone to recognize you..."
Lana reached up and pulled the long evil pins out of her hair, handing them along with the hat to Susan. "Honestly, it's driving me crazy," she said, shaking out her hair from it's updo. One of those pins poked me in the car, and I'd be happy never to see it again.
Susan grinned, tossing the offending items onto a nearby bench. "Consider it done," she said, holding Brad's trenchcoat open for Lana to put on. "I've arranged for the judge to meet you at the cabin tomorrow - Brad will take you there now. Is there anything I can bring out for you?"
"No, I think I'll be fine. I have a few things in my bag that should suffice." Lana nodded towards a small duffle at her feet. She turned to Brad, who was standing behind her. "Are we leaving then?"
He glanced out the doors, then nodded. "I think we should get going. Susan, would you--"
"Of course," she said. "What would you like me to tell them?"
"Tell them..." Brad paused.
"Tell them that the wedding is delayed indefinately at the bride's request," Lana said, winking at Brad. "Sara deserves to squirm a little for this stunt."
Brad laughed, and Susan nodded, clearly amused. "I'll give you two ten minutes to disappear," Susan said, and walked down the hallway towards the back of the courthouse. Lana followed Brad out to his car, relieved when no one appeared to notice them.
Just past the exit out of the city, Lana's cell rang.
"Don't answer it," Brad suggested.
"She'll call back."
"Turn it off then."
The phone stopped ringing, then started again almost immediately. Lana took a breath, then flipped it open.
"Hello, Sara," she said calmly, ignoring Brad's disapproving look.
"Where are you?" Sara was frantic, and Lana felt just a little guilty for running away as the tirade continued. "Do you have any idea what this is going to do to our company? Are you still getting married? What about the contract? Brad Wesley is going to sue us out of everything--"
"Brad's right here, Sara. Calm down. He's not going to sue anyone." Lana held a finger to her lips at Brad's loud chuckle. "We just decided to take a little road trip, that's all."
"That's all?" Sara practically wailed in Lana's ear, and she held the phone away briefly, flinching. "A road trip? Lana, I've got a PR nightmare to deal with here, and--"
"One that you created," Lana commented wryly.
"But our company," Sara said, snuffling. "You know how much we need this contract, especially since Sandra is having trouble getting Darrin Anderson on board. It's not just my money on the line here Lana - I hope you remember that."
"It's not going to be a problem, Sara. Just trust me, okay? I'll call you in a few days."
"I guess I don't have a choice, do I? I'll be waiting for your call." Sara disconnected, and Lana flipped her phone shut. Brad eyed her, a wary expression on his face.
"What did she mean about it not just being her money?" he asked, keeping an eye on the dirt road they had turned onto. "How many stockholders are we talking about? Who are they?"
"That's not really important..."
"I disagree." Brad pulled up in front of the cozy log cabin Lana remembered so well, and shut off the engine. He turned, watching her through suspicious eyes. "Spill it, Lana. What are you hiding from me?"
"After the wedding," she said firmly, opening the door, and stepping out. "I'll tell you everything tomorrow, after we're married."
Party Plans?
Monday, May 18, 2009
I'm having trouble coming up with party plans every week. This makes me less than excited to write on this particular topic...so I put it off, and end up doing it last minute. In my mind, I see this topic as one with lots of helpful suggestions, menus, pictures, and projects, but I never seem to have the time to flesh them out so well.
I'm not sure whether I should keep trying with the party plans, or change the topic for Mondays to something that would be a little easier/less time intensive to post. Letting myself off the hook, so to speak.
Comments/suggestions would be most appreciated - I've been thinking about this all weekend, and still haven't come up with a good compromise. Are you (generally speaking) enjoying the party plans? Not so much? Anything else you'd like to see here or specific party themes that would be of interest?
Variety News & WIP Reports
Sunday, May 17, 2009
- Party Plan: Memorial Day BBQ
- Lana & Brad really are getting married this week, I promise! Chapters 13 & 14 this week.
- Wonders & Blunders explores computer hardware
- On the reading list: Paranormal romance & Suspense
Elsewhere on the Variety Network:
A new manicure on Nail Art Tuesday
Tea on Tap switches to a new weekly Wednesday review.
Scaryview Cemetery announces a mystery concept for this year's party.
WIP Reports
Short Story: I started over, and renamed my draft to "Seducing the Moon". I normally force myself to work through the first draft no matter what, but I had an epiphany doing laundry, and it just made the whole thing work so much better. It's flowing well, and I'm going to try to finish the first draft by next weekend.
Novel editing: I marked up 6 more pages yesterday, and my goal is to mark up 10-15 more this week. I've also started an outline for it that I need to finish this week, so I can edit with a clear picture of the plot arcs in mind. Excuse my muddling through – this is the first novel I've edited, so I'm still “finding my way”.
Loving Lana: This week's chapters were hard – I'm at that point where I could veer off my original plot very easily. So I started an outline last week, and I'm roughing it out for this week's chapters too. I rarely start writing with an outline, but I do find them helpful after I get started to keep track of where things “should” be going.
Scaryview Sanitarium Mystery: Hubby and I have agreed on a plan for the mystery that will form the backbone of our haunted hospital Halloween party this year. We're working on developing the five characters that the story will feature, and histories for each. My goal this week is to pin my hubby down on some key character traits for each so I can get started writing the draft of the horror story (wish me luck!).
Weekly Reading List: 5/10 – 5/16
Saturday, May 16, 2009
I always have at least two books going at once – one or more ebooks for portability, one print book for late nights in bed. Sometimes more. Here’s what I’ve been reading this week, with a few comments:
Dewey: The Small-Town Library Cat Who Touched the World by Vicki Myron & Bret Witter (Hardcover)
I was given this book as a gift. Honestly, I just about put it down after the first half. It’s about a small town in Iowa, and a cat adopted by the library after being found in the book drop half frozen to death. The first half focuses more on the town, which wasn't really all that interesting to me. The second half is the gem though - where I finally got to know the writer and the cat on an intensely personal, all-too-human level.
I'm all too familiar with the bonds a human and animal can forge when faced with adversity on either side, and in this particular case, Ms. Myron does a wonderful job of capturing that in the second half of the book. I wonder if it took her the first half to work up to sharing such personal details about herself with us all. In any case, the latter half made the first worth enduring for me. And I'm not even a cat person.
Undressed by Heather MacAllister (Harlequin Blaze eBook, also available in print)
I’ve always liked Heather MacAllister, but I was a bit skeptical about this particular book. It’s a collection of interconnected short-stories, all centered around a bridal shop in Colorado. I have to say though, I loved it. The stories were all different, and each one with it’s own quirky characters that made me want to laugh and cry alternately. As a bonus, the short stories gave me a natural stopping point that I appreciated more than I thought I would, since I tend to read ebooks on my lunch or in short bursts. Excellent escape fiction, and sarcastically witty too.
Mugging the Muse: Writing Fiction for Love AND Money by Holly Lisle (free eBook, .pdf format)
I loved this book. It’s not just good, no-holds-barred advice for writers; it’s also a peek into Holly’s own writing journey, complete with all the mistakes she wishes she’d never made (and urges us to avoid). Throughout the guide, her absolute love of writing shines brightly, and I personally was left with a very optimistic outlook on my potential writing career. It also made me question my own motives and goals, something I really appreciated. It’s free – go download a copy. You’ll be glad you did.
I’ve started another romance eBook (of course), and I’m eying Nothing to Lose by Lee Child for next week.
What are you reading this week?
Storytime: Loving Lana, Ch. 12
Friday, May 15, 2009
Brad sat in the parking lot, staring at the media contingent that had gathered on the courthouse lawn. He knew that Lana never would have arranged this, but was irritated with her nonetheless.
"I swear I didn't know about this. Sara called the press." Her voice was a little steadier, but she still sounded...fragile. Brad forced back the angry comment that sprang to mind.
"I thought that might be the case." He checked his watch, then scanned the crowd. The judge hadn't come down yet. Good. "Are you with Sara now?"
"Yes."
"Do you want to get married like this, Lana?" He didn't have to wait long for her decision.
"No." Her answer was firm, and he let out a breath, relieved they were in agreement.
"Okay then," he said, switching gears. "Tell Sara to drop you off at the back door of the courthouse. Tell her if you're going to get married on stage, you might as well make a grand entrance. I'll be waiting just inside the doors. Let her think we're going through with it. Can you do that?"
"Yes. I'll see you there." It was only one word, but Brad heard the gratitude in her voice. He snapped his cell phone shut. Susan was already in the courthouse, he'd have her take care of the final details. He put the car in gear and pulled slowly out of the lot, driving around the corner to park across the street from the side door.
Moving quickly, he shrugged out of his suit jacket, and removed his tie. He unbuttoned the top button on his shirt, and rolled up his sleeves. He donned a baseball cap and sunglasses, and slung a trenchcoat from the back seat over his arm as he exited the vehicle. He ran across the street, knowing that anyone just glancing his way would see another reporter, rather than thier target. Years of practice at evading the press had taught him how to blend in.
Once inside, he took out his cellphone, speed-dialing Susan.
"Meet me by the south entrance," he said. "Plans have changed." He disconnected, and almost immediately heard the click of her heels coming down the hallway towards him. She was frowning, and he held up both hands defensively. "It's not what you think," he said as she approached.
"Are you still going to marry her?" Susan's voice was icy, her arms crossed over her chest. Brad held back a smile at her protective stance.
"Yes," he said, earning a raised eyebrow. "It's not her fault - Sara Martin arranged all this. I need you to help us run away." The change in Susan's expression to one of sympathy was immediate, and she nodded, reaching out to take the coat.
"I'm sorry," she said, glancing around the hall. "Where's Lana? What do you need me to do?"
"She'll be here shortly - we'll need to leave as soon as possible. If you could arrange for the judge to meet us at the cabin tomorrow..."
"Consider it done," she said, flipping open her phone. She spoke briefly with the judge, then disconnected. "All set." She pointed at the glass doors. "And I think that's your bride arriving now."
"Just drop me off here at the side door." Lana directed Sara around the vans and SUV's parked in front of the courthouse. "Brad said we may as well make a grand entrance if we're going to entertain the media." She unbuckled her seat belt and reached for the door as Sara turned off the engine.
"Good idea," Sara said, reaching for her purse. "I'm glad you can both see the business benefit to this event." She opened her door, and started to get out.
"Um...would you mind meeting me out on the lawn?" Lana asked, her tone apologetic.
"Sure, I guess," Sara said, pulling the door closed. "You don't want me to walk out with you?"
"Brad and I will walk out together, if that's okay." Lana stepped out of the car.
"We'll just be a few minutes - I'll see you out there, okay?" She hoped her smile was convincing as Sara nodded. She closed the door, and walked calmly up the stairs and through the door, relieved to see Brad and Susan waiting for her just inside.
Wonders & Blunders: yWriter & Palm Desktop v.6
Thursday, May 14, 2009
As readers here may have noted, I’m currently trying to edit one of my novel drafts, hopefully into something worthy of eventual submission. I think the plot is good, the writing isn’t too bad, and I’d like to see how far I can go with it. Even if it goes nowhere, I’ll still benefit from the experience of polishing it up.
I printed it out, all 94 pages (single spaced, which was my first mistake). I started marking it up mercilessly. I liked it. A lot. But then I started thinking about how I was going to put it back together again, and I panicked.
I need to move scenes around – especially at the very beginning, and the very end of the story. I wanted to start a more “proper” outline (I outlined this novel on color-coded index cards) that would help me piece things back together, but it still seemed daunting to have to cut/paste/copy/move large portions of text around in my document file, while rewriting at the same time. I had no idea how I was going to keep track of all the changes, moves, etc.
Then I remembered reading about “novel planning software” during NaNoWriMo. And I started wondering if that might not make this task somewhat less daunting. I poked around, read some reviews and forum threads, and finally decided to download the free yWriter program. I installed it on my netbook (coming soon to a “wonders” post), and spent last night just plugging my short story into it as a sort of an “outlined project” just to learn how to use the different pieces and explore how they work together.
I have to say – this is the most useful piece of software I’ve come across in a long time. It’s full-featured but simple to use, I can ignore what I don’t need, and most of all, it divides a manuscript into chapters and scenes, so I can move things around very easily without losing track of where I am or where I need to be. This program is going to make editing my novel so much easier than working from a huge text file, and when I’m done, I can export it back out into another huge text file, apply basic manuscript formatting and call it good. For editing, I plan on continuing through my manuscript by hand, and rewriting the scenes into yWriter as I get to them (or copy from the original file if a scene needs minimal rewriting, then edit in the program).
I’m sure it won’t work for everyone (nothing ever does), but if you’re looking for writing software, definitely check this program out. I think this is definitely going to make the writing process more efficient for me.
Blunder: Palm Desktop v. 6.2
I adore my PDA. I have a Palm TX that I wax poetic about at random intervals. And when I got my first Palm, the Z22, I adored the Palm Desktop too. It was amazing and worked so well to keep everything on my desktops at work/home synced up with my PDA. I truly couldn’t keep up with my own life without my digital calendar apps.
But I think Palm gave up with its latest version of the desktop. Color-coding was removed, as was a great deal of functionality that made it easy to keep PDA and desktop in sync. Even the format isn’t as nice – the whole thing literally went “gray”.
I’m very disappointed that Palm gave up on PDA’s in favor of smart phones (bah), and the cross-platform programs that made them even more functional. Thank goodness for Pimlical and Datebk6, which is what I use on my PDA/desktop instead of the native Palm apps.
What Is It?
Wednesday, May 13, 2009
I couldn't decide if this one would be easy or hard - but I'm looking at it already knowing what it is, so we'll see how the guesses go for this. I don't think it's in my flickr stream, just a common household-type item. This week's photo:Storytime: Loving Lana, Chapter 11
Tuesday, May 12, 2009
“I guess this is it,” Lana mused as she watched the sun come up on Saturday morning. The sky was bright and clear, promising a beautiful day for an outdoor wedding. She hadn’t gotten much sleep, and was on her third cup of coffee already. It was going to be a long, nerve-wracking day.
After a quick shower, she quickly put on the new lingerie that Sara had insisted she buy the other night. Sliding a simple bone-colored silk sheath over her head, she added a wide lace belt and the matching tailored lace jacket over the top. It was elegant and formal, and the soft texture against her skin made Lana feel just the slightest bit naughty. Sara had also insisted on new heels with scalloped edges to match the dress, and as she turned in front of the mirror, Lana had to admit they were perfect. The doorbell rang, and she took a deep breath before going to let Sara in.
“Good morning!” Sara’s cheerful greeting rang annoyingly in Lana’s ear. Probably just nerves, she thought as she forced a smile for her friend. “You’re breathtaking, Lana!”
“Thank you.” Lana glanced down self-consciously, smoothing her hands down her dress. “I need to get some jewelry, and then I’ll be ready” she said, touching her neck lightly.
“I’ve got it covered,” Sara said, holding out a large square velvety box. “Something old and borrowed.” She opened the top to reveal a lovely pearl necklace with an emerald cut ruby pendant in the center, with earrings to match. “They were my great grandmother’s,” Sara said, motioning for Lana to turn around. She sat the box on the counter, and removed the necklace. “I think they’ll be perfect,” she said, clasping the necklace at Lana’s nape.
“I don’t know what to say.” Lana took the earrings Sara held out, and hooked them in her ears. “They’re gorgeous – are you sure you it’s okay for me to wear them? They must be worth a fortune.”
“Don’t be silly – of course it’s okay,” Sara replied. “They’re made for occasions like this.” She reached into her purse and handed one more item to Lana. “And here’s something blue, since I couldn’t talk you into blue lingerie.” Lana laughed as she took the navy garter.
“Do people actually wear these anymore?” she asked, stepping into the band and securing it high on one thigh. She held one side of her skirt up, modeling the lacy accessory for her friend.
“Only to weddings,” Sara replied, laughing. “Now, where’s your hat?” She checked her watch. “We need to get moving if we want to beat the…uh…traffic.”
Lana put on the Kennedy-style pillbox hat they’d chosen, and secured it to her hair with pins, adjusting the half-veil over her eyes in the hall mirror. She applied lipstick, a wine color to contrast with the monochrome outfit, then dropped it in her bag. Satisfied with her appearance, she stepped towards the door.
“What traffic?” she asked. “It should be pretty quiet downtown on a Saturday, don’t you think?” She locked the door behind them, turning back to see a nervous expression on Sara’s face.
“The Wesley’s are a popular family in town – surely some of the press will have caught wind of the event…” her voice trailed off as Lana’s frown deepened.
“How would they have found out,” she asked as they walked to Sara’s car. “I know Brad wanted to keep this quiet for a while.” She looked over at Sara after they were seated. “You didn’t leak this, did you Sara?”
Sara shrugged, starting the engine. “I may have told a few people,” she said lightly. “Would it be so bad if there were a few pictures taken?” She pulled away from the curb. “You have to admit that an article on Lana Anderson, of Martin Interiors marrying rich-catch Brad Wesley could be good for business.”
Lana closed her eyes, her head dropping back against the seat only to pop upright again. “Ow!” she said, as a hatpin poked into her skull. She rubbed her head carefully, regretting the hat. She scowled at Sara.
“You know that Brad will be livid when he finds out,” she said. “He may cancel the wedding altogether.”
“He can’t,” Sara said blithely. “It would be a breach of contract. And there’s nothing in the document that stipulated no press,” she finished, clearly pleased with herself.
Lana shook her head, blinking back tears. As nervous as she was, she never imagined Sara would do something like this. It was going to be a nightmare, and there was nothing she or Brad could do to stop it.
“I suppose it didn’t occur to you that maybe I wouldn’t appreciate a wedding day filled with reporters and cameras?” Lana asked. Her cell phone rang, and she grabbed it from her purse. Brad’s number showed on the caller ID.
“Hello?” she said, trying to steady her voice.
“Change of plans.” Brad said crisply.
Weekly Party Plan: Pajama Party!
Monday, May 11, 2009
Invitations: A doll or baby pillow case would be perfect for this – get out a sharpie to write the details. Go nuts! Use colored sharpies on white cases for extra artistic appeal. Invite women only for a girls night out, or invite the guys for a more risqué event.
Décor: Pillows, of course! Put them everywhere – on couches, floors, wherever there’s an empty spot. Don’t forget plenty of blankets too, as impromptu sleeping bags. If you have some stuffed animals, toss them around for a little something extra.
Menu: Think back to your school days. Normally a pajama party involved either ordered in pizza, or make-it-yourself English muffin pizzas. You can’t really go wrong either way, just forget the diet for a night, and stock up on soda, chips, popcorn and pretzels for snacking. Spice it up a bit for adults with some fruity alcoholic concoctions, or a “mix your own” bar.
Activities: Karaoke, charades, trivial pursuit – keep everyone involved and active after dinner and much laughter will certainly be the result. No pajama party would be complete without a pillow fight, and a movie will round out the evening nicely. Just the girls? Ask everyone to share their “first kiss” story for plenty of giggles & sighs.
Dress code: Pajamas, of course! Give prizes for the best “bed head” (think bandanas or cheap plastic rollers). Ask guests to bring their favorite teddy bear (or stuffed animal), and tell the story behind the bear as an “icebreaker”.
Variety News & WIP Reports
Sunday, May 10, 2009
I've been slacking off here at The Variety Pages - no book review yesterday (haven't finished the book yet), and a late post today. You'd think the new netbook would make things easier - and it will, but it was just one of those weeks last week. I'm getting my "groove" back though, so here's what to expect this coming week:
- Pajama Party plans
- Lana gets married in chapters 11 & 12 of "Loving Lana"
- Wonders & Blunders explores ???
- Book review of "Dewey" (promise!)
Elsewhere around the network:
Nail Art Tuesday features a French manicure with water-based polish
Two tisane reviews at Tea on Tap
WIP Reports
Writing: I finally got going on my short story, "Guarding the Moon". It's more difficult than I thought it would be writing outside my normal genre, but in a good way, I think. This plot requires more setting/emotion than dialogue so far, and I'm better at dialogue, so it's stretching me.
No editing done this week, but I did buy new colored pens & highlighters...
Aquarium Report: Two new dojo loaches and a baby goldfish are in residence of my tank now! I wanted to post a picture, but so far, can't get said fish to cooperate. Hopefully I can get one later...
Storytime: Loving Lana, Ch. 10
Friday, May 8, 2009
“I wasn’t planning on that happening,” Brad said softly half an hour later. He handed Lana her shirt and she slid her arms into the sleeves, deftly buttoning up the front. She avoided eye contact, feeling the heat on her cheeks from a nervous blush. She reached for her skirt, pulled it on and tucked in her shirt. The whole time she was keenly aware of him watching her every move.
“I didn’t either.” Lana slipped her shoes on over bare feet, and stuffed her nylons into her purse. Left with nothing more to focus on, she finally looked at Brad, elbows propped on his knees as he sat in one of the office chairs. She frowned at his expression. “I – was it—I know I’m out of practice…” she stuttered, feeling her face flush with embarrassment. Shut up Lana, she mentally scolded. Just shut up. She dropped her gaze to the floor, blinking back tears.
“No Lana. God no,” Brad said, taking her hand and pulling her forward. “You were – you are perfect. Don’t ever think you aren’t.” He tugged, and Lana willingly settled on his lap, resting her head on his shoulder. Her nose close to his neck, she inhaled deeply, reveling in his pure male scent.
“Tell me what you were doing that day?” It was a request, not a demand. Still, Lana tensed up, wary.
“Why? It doesn’t matter now,” she said calmly. “Does it?”
“It does if it’s holding us apart.” Brad trailed his fingers over her leg, his deep voice soothing next to her ear. “Don’t you want to clear the air so we can start over?”
“Yes,” Lana said, pausing as she carefully chose her words. “But I just…I can’t right now. Not yet.” She boldly placed a light kiss on his jaw. “But soon, I promise. After--”
“—the wedding,” Brad finished sarcastically. He leaned forward, eased her off his lap and stood. “Why do you really want to marry me, Lana?”
“I don’t know.” Lana swiped at a tear with her finger. “I just feel like…like I’m supposed to be with you.” She lifted her gaze to stare into his eyes, regretting the confusion reflected in them. “But I need to know that you trust me, Brad. I need to know that whatever happened in the past doesn’t matter to you. It’s an issue of trust.”
“And you don’t trust me enough to tell me what happened.”
Lana nodded.
“Okay,” Brad said, letting out a long breath. “We’ll play it your way.” He kissed her gently on the forehead, then walked to the door. Holding it open, he turned, waiting for her. “Do you need a ride on Saturday?” he asked as she gathered her things and walked out ahead of him.
“No,” she said. “Sara will want to come, so I’ll have her give me a ride.” They walked down the hall and out to the parking lot in silence, stopping when they reached Lana’s car.
“So I’ll see you Saturday then,” Brad said, leaning over to place a quick kiss on her lips. She nodded as he turned to go, then remembered.
“Brad, wait.” He turned. “I really appreciate all the plans, but I’ll pick out my own dress and flowers. You really don’t need to pay for all this – I’m not destitute or anything.”
“Okay. If you need anything, you know where to reach me.” Brad shrugged, a slight grin crossing his lips. “You can skip the dress altogether if you want – though it might be a little distracting…”
Lana rolled her eyes, unable to hold back a smile of her own. “I’ll see you Saturday,” she called, with a brief wave before she got into her car. She took a few breaths, realizing suddenly that she was exhausted and exhilarated all at once. She started the engine and pulled out of the lot, turning towards Sara’s house. Hopefully Sara would be open to dinner and a little shopping.
Wonders & Blunders: Wireless Internet & Multi-Color Pens
Wednesday, May 6, 2009
Wonders: Wireless InternetI could go on and on about all the reasons I hesitated to get the wireless module for our internet modem. One of them is that I'm online all day, nearly everyday (I build & maintain web sites for a living), and suffer from sort of a "technological saturation". I feel like I need certain "boundaries" to keep myself from being absorbed into "the machine", so to speak.
The problem is, I have a hard time distancing myself from computers anymore. Even when I'm not "online", I still use a PDA for scheduling, my address book, budgeting, note-taking...nearly every part of my life is "digitized". And last fall, when I upgraded my PDA to one with wireless capabilities, I finally broke down and ordered the wireless module for our modem. Not only did that allow me to sync my PDA and email with my desktop, but it also effectively broke the "boundry" I'd held of not having computers in the living room.
Needless to say, when the dam broke, it caused a veritable flood of connectivity. I can "tweet" from the kitchen on my PDA while making tea or cooking dinner. I can sit here and type my blog posts in front of the TV, multi-tasking over much of the evening. And while I still have mixed feelings about whether I *should* be enjoying the interactivity of it all, I freely admit, I don't ever want to give it up.
So yes, I love our wireless internet access. It's a serious technological "wonder" that still amazes me every day.
No, I'm still not getting a cell phone.
Blunders: Multi-Color Pens
Last week I started editing the first draft of a novel I wrote a couple years ago. I thought it would be really handy to use different colored pens for different types of edits. My husband reminded me of these super-cool pens with several colors of ink in one, and I thought that would be the perfect editing pen. So we headed out to the office supply store (who doesn't love those?), and I bought a three-pack. I excitedly tore open the package, and sat down to do some more editing.It was a most disappointing experience, unfortunately. It was hard to get the colors to start, and then they kept "siezing up" at the most inopportune times (like whenever I tried to use them). It was most frustrating, and I finally ended up finishing the session in all green ink, because that was the one that worked consistently.
I think it's back to the office supply store for separate colored pens & maybe a highlighter or two. These multi-colored pens are a great idea, but after fighting with them the other night, I remember why I stopped using them in college too. Not worth the money or the frustration!
What Is It?
Congratulations, Joy! You get to choose between "Confessions of a Shopaholic" by Sophie Kinsella, or "Lost Souls" by Lisa Jackson (the spine is in worse shape on the Jackson book), and I'll include a sample tin of a signature blend tea from Adagio Teas. I don't think I have your current address, so if you'd be so kind as to email me... :-)
Here is the photo for this week - good luck everyone!
To enter: Simply post a comment with your best guess as to what the subject of the photo is. Each correct answer = 1 drawing entry. Drawings held at the end of each month. Prizes include a book and a tin of tea.
Storytime: Loving Lana - Ch. 9
Tuesday, May 5, 2009
Previous Chapter
“I have your contract, Lana.” Sara breezed through the door just as Lana was gathering her things to leave. “I made you a copy,” she said, handing over a folder. “You should probably take a look at the last page.”
Lana set her coat and bag back down on the desk, and opened the file from the back. She skimmed a page that wasn’t part of the original contract.
“We’re getting married Saturday?” Her eyebrows rose. “Wow, looks like he’s made all the arrangements already. All I have to do is show up.” Perplexed, she kept reading. It was all there, the day, time, which judge would perform the ceremony, even which part of the lawn they would stand on. Apparently a prominent florist and an expensive dress shop were each awaiting her call, with credit on standby for whatever she needed.
“Why would he do all that without consulting with me first?” Lana frowned at Sara, who shrugged. “Doesn’t he think I’m capable—“
“I think you’re very capable.” Brad stood with one shoulder propped on Lana’s door frame. “I just thought that we might as well do this as quickly and quietly as possible, since the contract starts as soon as our marriage does.”
Lana’s felt her cheeks flame. “Brad! How long have you been standing there?” Shock and something far more carnal raced through her veins, warming her to the core as she struggled to maintain her composure. He nodded to Sara, grinning as he entered the room.
“Not long,” he said, stopping in front of her. “I just dropped by to give you this.” He reached into his pocket and held out a small square box. The kind of box that jewelry came in. Like earrings. Or other small, shiny things…
Then the box was open, and Lana found herself staring at a gorgeous emerald-cut diamond, surrounded by tiny sapphires and set in white gold. She heard Sara’s quiet gasp as Brad carefully pulled it free, and set the box on the desk. He reached for Lana’s hand, and pushed the ring gently onto her finger.
“Wow,” Lana whispered, turning her hand towards the window, and watching the stones flash and sparkle.
“I don’t remember that in the contract,” Sara remarked, walking out the doorway. “I’ll see you two later.” The door clicked shut, and Lana looked back to meet Brad’s stare.
“I—this--it’s gorgeous, Brad. But you didn’t have to—“
“I wanted to,” he replied, his voice husky and raw. He stepped closer, caressed the side of her face with his fingers. “I want you, Lana – I never stopped wanting you.”
Lana leaned into his touch, electrified by the heat from his skin. She sighed as his fingers slid down her neck, closing her eyes against the intensity of his gaze. He gently pulled her closer, and Lana went willingly into his arms. Home, she thought briefly before his lips claimed hers.
Weekly Party Plan: Manicure Night
Monday, May 4, 2009
Invitations: A simple pretty note card will do – include a cheap emery board, of course! Ask guests to bring their favorite nail clippers & polish color, and mention that all other items will be provided.
Décor/supplies: Clean and bright is the order of the day. Either buy or borrow a hand spa for hot wax (bacteria and such can’t grow in the paraffin, so it’s safe to share, just don’t reuse the wax). Head over to the dollar store and buy a pack or two of hand towels, one for each guest, and a few extras. You’ll also need a pack of inexpensive emery boards & small orange sticks (round sticks with one pointed end and one slanted end). Then head over to your local craft store, and pick out several items that you can leave in small bowls on the table for guests to do nail art with (rhinestones, glitter, tiny stickers/decals – whatever you can find).
Protect your table with an inexpensive plastic tablecloth or butcher paper. Create a setting for each guest with a hand towel, emery board, and a small bowl with a little hand soap in water. Print out instructions for a basic manicure on pretty paper, and set that in the center of each place. Down the center of the table, place a couple bottles of polish remover, cotton balls, q-tips, a few bottles of hand lotion and the small bowls of nail art supplies. Each guest can then do a manicure at their own pace.
Example steps for a simple manicure:
1. Remove any old nail polish.
2. Soak fingers for a few minutes.
3. Apply lotion.
4. Dip hands in wax bath – 3-5 layers, let sit until cool.
5. Remove and discard wax, rub in extra lotion.
6. Clip/file nails, buff tops lightly.
7. Base coat, 2 coats polish
8. 1 coat top coat, then nail art, if desired.
9. Final top coat, to seal.
Make sure to provide a garbage receptacle nearby for used wax and other items.
Menu: This is one party where finger-food just won’t work. In the summer, an ice cream bar would be great for an after-dinner party, in the summer, maybe a chocolate fountain with various items to dip (with forks, of course). A luscious cake or cheesecake selection is certain to make everyone happy as well. Keep the food in a separate room from the manicure supplies for safety. Eat first, then do nails!
Here's to soft, relaxed and pampered hands, all wrapped up in a good time.
Variety News & WIP Reports 5/3 - 5/9/09
Sunday, May 3, 2009
- “Manicure Night” party plan
- Chapters 9 & 10 of “Loving Lana”
- Winner of April's "What is It?" revealed!
- Wonders & Blunders in the office
- Book review of “Dewy, The Library Cat”
Elsewhere on the network:
Nail Art Tuesday features a flowery blue French manicure.
Tea on Tap features two new reviews.
Scaryview Cemetery explores potential “Save the Date” notices.
WIP Reports
Writing Report: Lots of progress made this week – I finally started editing one of my finished manuscripts, and actually enjoyed the process. It’s kind of fun to work with words that are already written (though I’m rewriting a lot of them, and rearranging the rest so far). I started an outline for a short story for the challenge at The Lost Wanderer, but I need to start writing before I know if it will work or not. This week I hope to keep editing, write a rough draft for the short story, and outline a hospital-themed mystery serial for our annual Halloween Party. Lots to do!
Goldfish Aquarium Report: This is just a fun project for the next few weeks. I have a 45 gallon goldfish tank, and sadly, I recently lost one of my two fancy goldfish. The survivor lives with one lonely dojo loach left over from a fire-belly toad tank remodel last year. Dojo’s are social critters, as are goldfish, so my “mission” this week is to update the tank with some new décor, and find a couple dojo buddies for my loach. A buddy for my goldfish will come after the new loaches get settled in.
Thanks for reading, and have a great week!
Lost Souls by Lisa Jackson
Saturday, May 2, 2009
The story is about vampire mystique, without there being any actual vampires in it, which I found intriguing. As always, the author pulls the reader along from page to page in nearly unending action. I love this kind of fast-paced writing, and spent far too many late nights unwilling to put the book down for sleep.
The only problem I had, as I mentioned is Kristi. I want to like her, really - I do like her for the most part. But why must she be so stupid? While I couldn't stop turning the pages, it seemed like I was also constantly yelling at Kristi not to make the bad decision in almost every instance. Even when her own logic seemed sound, she still went against it and put herself in harms' way again. And again, and again, and again! Arg - so frustrating to watch...uh, read...a character like that. Honestly, by the end, I kind of felt like it was contrived - the only way to keep the plot moving was to have her in those situations.
In any case, I still found it a highly engaging and enjoyable book. Jackson's next novel is Malice, out in hardcover now. I'll buy it when the paperback comes out - should be another good read!
Storytime: Loving Lana, Chapter 8
Friday, May 1, 2009
“Martin Interiors is going to be faxing over a new contract later today, Susan. Bring it in as soon as you get it, please.” Brad’s administrative assistant glanced over her monitor as Brad walked up to her desk.
“Yes sir.” She held out two slips of paper. “Here are your messages. Are we keeping M.I. for another year?” Brad glanced down at the notes, a wry grin lifting the corners of his lips.
“Looks like it.” He turned towards his office. “You might want to buy something suitable to wear to a wedding…” He glanced back, amused at the confusion and shock on her face. He went into the office, and closed his door. He settled in at his desk and reached for the phone.
A few hours later, there was a knock at his door.
“Come in.” He turned a sheet of notes over to shield them from curiosity. Susan entered, holding a file folder.
“I have that contract from M.I.” She passed it over the desk to him, and stood waiting. “If you’d like to sign it now, I can fax it back…”
“That won’t be necessary just yet,” he said, opening the folder. “I need to make sure the changes we discussed this morning are here.” Susan nodded and stood for a moment longer. Brad looked up over his reading glasses.
“Is there something else?”
“A wedding, sir?” Susan quirked one eyebrow up. “May I ask who’s getting married?”
Brad sat back in his chair, placing his glasses on top of the contract. Susan had been with him for the past fifteen years, and had witnessed the whole debacle of his past relationship with Lana. She deserved to know before the news went public.
“I am. I’m going to marry Lana Anderson.”
“But why would she—“ Susan sunk to the edge of a nearby chair, apparently in shock.
“I don’t know why she wants to marry me after what I did, but I’m taking advantage of it.” He leaned forward, propped his elbows on the desk and rubbed his face. “I can’t get her out of my head, Susan. Maybe this time I can do things differently, we can start over…”
Susan nodded, remaining silent. She hadn’t said a word when news of his very public breakup with Lana had spread through the office, though he had suspected she harbored some resentment. Several weeks of nearly undrinkable coffee in the mornings paired with a distinct lack of conversation had confirmed his theory. She’d stayed on though, and if the look on her face was any indication, she wasn’t sure this next move was a good one. Was she worried about him, or Lana, he wondered.
“It was Lana’s idea,” he added, feeling defensive at her silence. She merely tilted her head slightly, a gentle lift of her eyebrows challenging him. He wasn’t about to explain his part in forcing Lana to such drastic measures.
“Alright then.” Susan stood. “When will you two lovebirds be exchanging vows?”
“This Saturday morning, ten o’clock at the courthouse,” Brad said, ignoring her sarcastic tone. “I’d like you to attend as a witness, if possible.”
“Of course,” Susan said crisply. “Let me know when you’re done with the contract, and I’ll fax it back.” She turned and walked out of his office, closing the door behind her.
Brad put his glasses back on and opened the file. Half an hour later, he finished the last page, picked up a pen, and signed his name. He folded his coat over one arm, and took the folder out to Susan.
“This is ready to be faxed back to M.I.,” he said, handing her the file. “I need to take care of a few things, so I’ll see you tomorrow.”
“Have a good evening, sir.”
Brad couldn’t resist a grin at her disapproving tone, which earned him a frown as he walked by. He checked his watch as he exited the front doors. The item he’d ordered should be ready by now, and he set off down the sidewalk, trying to ignore the anxiety pulsing under his skin.
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