I've Moved!

Sunday, March 14, 2010

This blog is now officially an archive - I've moved! Please change your links to:


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Thank you for your patience and for sticking with me through the move. :-)

Notable Posts

Saturday, March 13, 2010

Did you miss the Notable Posts this week? They're over at the new Variety Pages! Go to: http://varietypages.jamiedebree.com/2010/03/07/notable-posts-36--31210.aspx to find this week's list.


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Indelibly Inked, Chapter 10

Friday, March 12, 2010

This serial novel posted every Friday. Don't forget to vote for what happens next after each chapter. Enjoy!

Ch 1 | Ch 2 | Ch 3 | Ch 4 | Ch 5 | Ch 6 | Ch 7 | Ch 8  | Ch 9

Indelibly Inked
Chapter 10

Looking back toward the bedroom again, she remembered seeing a window at the opposite end of the hall. But the dog had been in the living room. Adam would have gone that way, for sure. She pulled her shirt over her mouth and started crawling toward the front door. She didn't want to leave him if he needed her help.

A raspy bark from behind made her freeze, slowly looking back over her shoulder to see Adam's dog staring at her. His head was lowered and he barked again, then wheezed a few times before he turned and took a few steps in the opposite direction. Did he want her to follow him?

The dog barked again, then coughed, his tail low and nearly between his legs. He was obviously suffering. She remembered seeing a window at the end of the hall earlier. Sure that Adam would want her to save his dog, she turned and crawled the other way, the dog staying a few steps ahead. Through the smoke she saw a dark mass on the floor ahead and as she got closer, Claire gasped.

"Adam!" She hurried to his side, panic rising up as she saw the blood pooling beneath his head. Had he fallen? His dog whined, pacing between the window ahead and his master's body. Was he dead, she wondered? She slid two fingers onto his neck, searching for a pulse. Nothing. The smoke was thickening. She couldn't do anything for him until they got outside.

Forcing herself up she spotted a fake plant in the corner, and hoped the pot wasn't plastic. Quickly she stepped over Adam and picked up the heavy porcelain pot, throwing it as hard as she could into the window. The glass shattered out and she knocked the remaining shards out of the lower and side frames with a picture frame yanked off the wall. Fresh, cool air streamed in. She took several deep breaths, imagining she could feel it replacing the smoke in her lungs. Suddenly she was very aware of the severe pain in her foot, and it was all she could do to keep from dropping to the ground and grabbing her toes. Instead she patted the windowsill, pleased with the dog still had the energy to vault over it. She glanced over the sill to make sure he'd made it okay, then hurried back to Adam's side. 

She reached under his armpits and curled up with all the strength she could muster, dragging him to lay right in front of the window. Looking out again, she judged the distance to the ground. There was no way to lower him down gently, and they were running out of time. Flames were licking at the hallway as she leaned over him and pulled his right arm up onto the windowsill, then his right leg. Shoving at his hips, she managed to get his left toe out, and then suddenly gravity took over and his body was slipping neatly through the window.

She grabbed for his hands, surprised wihen his fingers locked around her wrists. It took all of her strength to lower him until his feet touched the ground. Then she let go, watching him crumple into a heap on the ground. She crawled out after him. In the brief flash she was concious as her feet touched the ground, she remembered her two broken toes. 

Wildcard Topic: Stress

Thursday, March 11, 2010

I've been under a good deal of stress at work lately, as you probably already know. This got me thinking about my natural reactions to stress - not really in a "how can I fix this" way, but more in an "observe & report" kind of way, if you know what I mean. Introspection is hard for me to resist (you probably already knew that too).

I have two basic reactions to stress. First, I go into "hyper-focus-fix-it" mode. You know how women are always complaining that they hate talking to men about their problems because men immediately try to "fix" whatever's wrong? Yeah - I do that too. When confronted with any kind of problem, especially if it's time-sensitive my brain kicks into high "problem solving gear" and starts clicking through all possible solutions in order to solve the problem as efficiently as possible. I've gotten pretty well at hiding this when it applies to other people...I try not to mention all the solutions I see for them, and just nod politely. Somedays I'm better at this than others.

Unfortunately, when it applies to a problem I'm *supposed* to be solving, I go into hyper-focus mode. This is good - it allows me to examine the problem from all sides, see a myriad of possible solutions and start troubleshooting in a logical, organized manner. If only I could apply that to my writing. However...it comes with a nasty side effect.

At my core I am a *very* introverted person. I do my best to supress it most days, because frankly, nearly everything that involves social interaction annoys me in some way or another. That particular part of my personality is not conducive to making/keeping friends or building/keeping professional relationships. It's not necessarily people themselves that annoy me (though some do, of course), but the actual act of interacting with someone and all the stimuli involved is enough to drive me insane most days (this is why I love the internet - most of the annoying stimuli are null online). I am constantly guarding my reactions to the social stimuli around me, which takes a lot of brain power and focus. The side effect of being hyper-focused on solving one problem is that I'm no longer thinking about my reactions to my environment and the people in it. Sometimes my reactions to the environment end up causing me *more* stress than the original problem...and because I'm aware of that, I end up trying to focus on both. Which always ends in extreme mental exhaustion and a rotten mood.

When that happens, my second natural reaction to stress kicks in: I shut down. When I get to this point, I simply stop working on whatever the problem was and I'm pretty well paralyzed to do anything until my brain sort of "resets" itself. There's no use even staring at the problem when this happens...the only "cure" is to spend time by myself, preferably reading a book (frequently more than one) or watching a movie/TV, but writing works too if I have no interruptions or noise. I have to completely walk away from the problem when I get to this point, whether it's on deadline or not. Thankfully I normally have most problems solved before they get this far, but one at work has reached this point this week. Hopefully having today off will rejuvenate me enough to tackle it again on Friday.

How do you react to stress? And what are some of your favorite ways to relieve stress?

Remember I'm moving to http://varietypages.jamiedebree.com next week - don't forget to change your links!

Writer, Brand Thyself: Blogging Tip Sheet & Twitter Intro

Wednesday, March 10, 2010

I'll admit, I purposefully made this week's post easy on myself because frankly, it's hard coming up with thoughtful, serious content on a time schedule, especially when everything else is in a state of temporary chaos. So here's a condensed list of blogging tips that I hope will be helpful, and a little assignment for you to complete before next week's post on getting comfortable with Twitter.

Blogging Tips

- Use a simple design that's easy to read.
- Post at least once per week, two or three times if possible.
- Establish regular posting days, so people know when to visit your site.
- Post content for the audience you want to attract.
- Make it about your readers just as much as it's about you.
- Reply to comments left on your blog as much as reasonably possible

Blog Networking Tips

- Find new blogs to follow through the comments left on your blog and others
- Use feed readers or email subscriptions to keep up with the blogs you're interested in.
- Make sure your site has rss feeds enabled, and links to both the feed and an email subscription.
- Keep a blogroll on your sidebar to promote blogs you find particularly interesting or useful
- Make some time daily to genuinely comment on posts at other blogs that speak to you
- Leave your blog address with all comments made, unobtrusively.
- Try to connect with one to two bloggers you haven't interacted with per week.
- Connect with bloggers on other social sites.
- Use other social networks to advertise your blog.

To that end, an optional assignment for anyone interested in next week's introduction to Twitter. If you don't have a twitter account, go sign up for one this week. Then click the link under my photo up there to "follow" me, and post a message to me that looks something like this "@JamieDeBree Okay, I'm on twitter. Introduce me!" If you're already on twitter, I'd like you to choose three people you follow to recommend to others in the comments here next week. And if I'm not following you already, send me a message so I know who you are.

Has this series on blogging been helpful to you? Do you have any other tips to add for others who might just be getting started?

Next week: Tackling Twitter


Remember I'm moving to http://varietypages.jamiedebree.com next week - don't forget to change your links!

Constrution Zone: Sets

Tuesday, March 9, 2010

I've discussed world building before, but I never thought of them as "sets" until I read the world building lesson in Holly's revision course recently. She refers to the world of a novel as a "set" for the characters to play on/against...which suddenly brought the whole thing more into focus for me.

I have serious tunnel vision when I'm writing. I get so hyper-focused on the characters and...well...torturing them, that I forget minor details like, say, putting them in surroundings that make sense. Part of this is a deep-seated fear of my prose turning a bright shade of purple. When I first showed my writing to a friend in high school, his main comment (aside from the fact that I shouldn't count on being a writer) was that it was too descriptive...and thus boring. I've read enough now to know that my writing wasn't actually that bad then - it was very descriptive and certainly unpolished, but it followed the style of literary classics, which I happened to be reading a lot of then.

Even so, I've always remembered that, and steered away from verbose description since then. Too far, really - because I love nothing better than being transported to an old manor in the deep south with moss hanging off the trees over the swamp (as in one of the Intrigues I read recently), or into an old barn with a romantic hay loft reachable only by ladder. Though I'll admit that I always wonder how people can really enjoy a roll in hay, since it has a tendency to poke when one least expects it to...

But I digress

I always knew I'd have to get some sort of handle on the "world" my stories are set in, even if they are just made up suburbs of larger well-known metropolitan cities. I put them there on purpose - just far enough out that I don't have to know much about the city, but close enough I can take advantage of well-known spots if I want to. Sneaky, eh? HPC is set in a suburb outside of Denver. Up until recently, the "world" of my stories has been more of an irritant than anything else (aside from things like bedrooms and dining rooms, which I find quite "writable" (wonder why that is?).

In any case, when Holly used the word "sets", it was like a light bulb went on in my brain. Or rather, the lights went up on the stage. Suddenly I "got it" - the props and sets popped out of the background and gained dimension in my head. I saw my characters moving around on sets from more of a director's perspective, rather than in the finished movie I tend to see in my head while drafting. She also talks about the items that are actually described vs those that are just implied, and the importance of an item relative to the description it gets. That was already sort of "ingrained" in my head from all the reading I've done, but this just sort of solidified it from the writer's side of the page for me, so to speak. Needless to say, I think my sets are going to really going to benefit from what I learned from that lesson.

How do you see the world you set your stories in? Is it a living thing, another character, a movie set? Do you plan out your world while you're outlining, or do you let it "evolve" as you draft?

Remember I'm moving to http://varietypages.jamiedebree.com next week - don't forget to change your links!

Goals for the Week 3/8 - 3/14/10

Monday, March 8, 2010

My demand that last week was absolutely going to be productive was met with a resounding smack-down by Murphy's Law (as I should have predicted, being rather familiar with dear Mr. Murphy). Apparently I should have whispered it to the writing world, because somehow, word got back to my office, and I found myself completely swamped with projects that all needed immediate attention. As you might imagine, this slows my personal productivity down to a crawl when I come home wanting nothing more than to just stare at the TV all night. Somehow though, I got all my posts for this main blog done and scheduled and displayed to the world on time...which presents me with hard evidence that had I wanted to, I could have made time for more actual writing progress than I did. I chose the blog over my writing...and that, dear friends, is troubling, even though I do have my reasons (excuses?) for scheduling things that way in the first place.

So, new rule in effect as of Sunday (yesterday): No writing of blog posts until after my daily writing goals are met.

I know this probably sounds absolutely logical and maybe even easy to many, but it presents a good many quandaries for me to deal with in terms of writing environment and my own sense of efficiency and logic. It's not logical for me to do something that will take longer before something that takes less time, nor is it efficient. But I want to see if I can do this, if I can break past my own mental barriers to put the writing first, even if it's inefficient and in a semi-"hostile" environment. Consider this fair warning - I may, in fact, miss some blog posts this week. But everytime I post, you'll know I hit my writing goal for the previous day (I do my blog posts the day before they're scheduled to appear). So yes, Sunday was a success. Monday is my day off from writing, so Tuesday will be the next "goal day".

To that end, here are my

Weekly Goals

Writing

- 800 words per day rewritten or 1 scene revised for Her Private Chef
- 500 words per day written for Hearts on Trial
- Next lesson of revision course read/incorporated
- The next chapter of Indelibly Inked, posted on time.

Personal

- Get back to working out
- Catch up at work
- Review daily "to-do" list every night before bed, make a new one for next day
- Menu plan for this week
- Move more posts/links between blogs.

That's what I'm up to this week - what's going on with you? Read any good books lately?

Variety News 3/7/10

Sunday, March 7, 2010

First, I want to let you all know that the lovely Samantha Hunter has started a blog called Life's A Beach. Head over and check it out...she's just getting started with it. I'm sure it's going to be great fun. 

I was positively *swamped* at work this week - my apologies for not quite making the rounds of all your wonderful blogs. In fact, I hardly had time to respond to comments here this week, but thank you to everyone who left a note. I always appreciate hearing from you, especially in light of the fact that blogger isn't always an amiable host.

Which leads to my big announcement for the week - The Variety Pages is moving to a new location and a cleaner, less cluttered template. The new address is http://varietypages.jamiedebree.com, and it's live and operational now - I've been double posting over there for the past week or so. If you're following via the Facebook Networked Blogs program, you don't need to do anything - the link will automatically change (I've changed the feed address already). Likewise if you've subscribed through my feedburner feed (anyone who simply "subscribed" to this blog should be getting that feed). That will automatically change too.

Unfortunately, I can't figure out how to change the Google reader feed...which means those of you who follow the blog through the Google friend connect widget will need to re-subscribe at the new blog (friend connect doesn't work on my new platform...my apologies). I hope you will still join me over there. I have a button to subscribe with google - if you click on that, you can choose the google reader and my posts will show up there again. There are also some other subscription links as well as an email subscription link at the new blog if you'd prefer to use one of those. Or you can simply change your link to my blog - which reminds me, if you do link to my blog, I'd be grateful if you would change those links to the new site.

The blogger blog will remain as an archive, for several months at least. I'll double-post for one more week to make sure all the feeds get transferred okay, and then I'll be posting solely at my own domain after that.

Why? Well, a post by another author moving her blog made me reconsider my decision to stay with blogger after I read that they were arbitrarily deleting music blogs...apparently there was a whole scandal involving music google thought was pirated, but really wasn't. The thought that google can arbitrarily decide to remove blogs without any forewarning or proof of wrongdoing doesn't really sit well with me. There are also little nits that bug me, like the fact that I've often had people tell me they have a hard time leaving a comment, and I have the same problem leaving comments on other blogs too. Overall blogger has been a good platform, but I feel like I've kind of "outgrown" it, for this particular blog anyway. My other blogs will stay for now, though they may move in the future too.

This Week on The Variety Pages

Monday - Goals
Tuesday - Construction Zone: Sets
Wednesday - Writer, Brand Thyself: Blogging Tip Sheet
Thursday - Wildcard: Working Through Stress
Friday - Serial Novel: Ch. 10 of Indelibly Inked

Elsewhere on The Variety Network

Spiced Variety Pages - This blog is going on hiatus for now...I just don't have time to put the posts together, at least not this week.

Nail Art Tuesday - I'm still feeling the "green", so another green manicure this week.

That's what's going on around here this week - anything I should watch for over at your place(s)?

Notable Posts 3/1 - 3/5/10

Saturday, March 6, 2010

Here are some posts I found notable in the blogosphere this week - a short list, as I didn't have much reading time, unfortunately. Enjoy!

Your Best Versus Best for Your Story from Writer Revealed

Tax Deductions for Writers: Guest Post by Pamela S. Thibodeaux from AuthorCulture

Trying Something New from Liana Brooks


These will also be featured in my weekly newsletter. Are you a subscriber?

Indelibly Inked, Chapter 9

Friday, March 5, 2010

This serial novel posted every Friday. Don't forget to vote for what happens next after each chapter. Enjoy!

Ch 1 | Ch 2 | Ch 3 | Ch 4 | Ch 5 | Ch 6 | Ch 7 | Ch 8

Indelibly Inked
Chapter 9

The minute the words were out of her mouth, Claire wished she could take them back. Adam stopped pacing, and sat on the coffee table in front of her. He didn't look at her, just reached out to run his finger over her tattoo again.

"Why do you keep doing that?" She wished he would look up. She wanted to see his eyes, to study the lines of his face.

His fingers moved slowly, methodically around her ankle, then a little higher to massage her calf. "I've always loved the feel of bare skin," he said, moving his hand closer to her knee. "Tell me about the tattoo, Claire. Who's initials are those? Who stole your heart so long ago, and never gave it back?"

"It doesn't matter." She scooted away from his touch, carefully getting up off the couch. "I'm tired, and I don't feel like playing games. Do you have a guest room, or am I sleeping on the couch?" She moved away, the need to put distance between them almost overwhelming. A shuffling noise from the far wall drew her attention, and she fought the urge to run. Adam's dog sat up on his bed, ears alert and head cocked to the side as if he was just waiting for her to move. "On second thought, if you don't have a guest room, point me to your room and you can have the couch. I'm not sleeping without a door between your dog and me."

Adam stepped over the table in a smooth motion, swinging her up in to his arms. Again. "We'll talk about this in the morning," he said gruffly, pausing only to flip the light off before he carried her down the hall and through an open door to the left. Three seconds later she was sinking into a thick quilt, her protest cut off when his mouth covered hers in a punishing kiss. His muscles were taunt with restraint as he settled over her on the bed, and she couldn't make herself push him away. So many years she'd longed for this - for him. He trailed kisses down the side of her neck and across her collarbone. Long fingers skated along her neckline, pushing the wrap-style top aside. Hot breath caressed the delicate skin, and she tugged on his shoulder, urging him to take what he wanted.

His lips grazed her breast, a shiver of pleasure shooting to her core as she arched up, silently begging for more. One of his hands slid down over her ribcage to smooth over her hip...

And then it was gone. Claire barely suppressed a cry of frustration as she tried to shake off the sensual fog, vaguely registering the bark of a dog in another room. Grateful for the darkeness she sat up, pulling her dress together as a different kind of heat rose in her face. Had he really just left her for his dog? She tried to find words, but ended up just staring at his back as he ran out the door.

She scooted forward, hanging her legs off the edge of the bed and rubbing her face in her hands. Inhaling deeply, she frowned. Was that smoke? Suddenly she realized that the fog wasn't all in her head and she recognized a frantic note in the constant barking. She stood, wincing only slightly as a rush of energy had her moving quickly out into the hall.

"Adam? Where are you?" The smoke got thicker as she moved down the hall, and she dropped to her knees, searching for breathable air. Coughing, she stopped, propping herself up against the wall and pulling her neckline up over her mouth. Through watery eyes she squinted through the smoke, then turned to look the other way. Sweat ran down the sides of her face as intense heat seemed to engulf her and she knew she had to get out of there, fast.




Wildcard Topic: Inspiration

Thursday, March 4, 2010

It's 12:38am as I'm writing this post, and I'm feeling decidedly uninspired. I don't have too many days like this. In fact, sometimes I'm inspired by the oddest things - a fuzzy leopard-print cover for my handbag, or a meal (good or bad).

People inspire me the most though - either through actions that make me ask "why" or just in their appearance and demeanor. The last really big piece of inspiration I got happened at a bar while my husband was playing pool. Two people in the room caught my eye, a man and a woman, for completely different reasons. Over the course of a night, I watched them - they didn't know each other, and were obviously from two very different worlds. By the end of the night, I had the start of an entire plot centered around two characters that are probably incredibly different than the people who inspired them. I love it when that happens.

I know many people get inspiration from books, photos and music, and I'm sure that people-watching is a favorite past time for most writers. Being outside is normally inspiring for me as well - nature always provides plenty of reason to explore "why".

So tell me - what was the last thing that inspired you?

Writer, Brand Thyself: Blogging Pt. 2 – Content & Networking

Wednesday, March 3, 2010

It’s said that the best way to learn something is to explain it to someone else. And that’s certainly true of this post series for me. In an attempt to present as many options as I can for using blogs and other social networking tools, I’ve been trying out new tools and methods for keeping everything organized and up-to-date. My own habits are becoming more streamlined because of it (or not, in some cases, on purpose).

As always, please remember that these are only my opinions, and won’t work for everyone or with everyone’s schedule. Take what you like, and ignore the rest.

Content

Blog readers tend to prefer topics one at a time. So my advice is to stick with writing. You can sprinkle the occasional “slice-of-life” in, but try to keep the blog focused most of the time. I’ve tried it both ways – focused definitely works better.

Your audience will grow from the type of content you post. Write about writing, and you’ll attract writers. Write something people can read (flash, short stories, poetry, etc) or about the latest book you’re submitting, and you’ll attract readers. Save the day-to-day snippets for other media where they are more suited (we’ll get there, I promise). I’m also of the opinion that querying details (requests, rejections, etc) should be kept off the blog. Agents, editors and other publishing professionals don’t need to see how many times your work has been rejected, or how bitter you are at having gotten the last form letter, or whatever. Professionals don’t advertise their failures

Last week I asked what readers thought was the minimum number of times a blog should be updated per week. Only one person guessed, and she guessed once per day.

My answer: Once per week.

Obviously more is better, but more than once per day is too much, in my opinion and honestly, every day is probably too much for most readers. Two to three times a week is probably optimal for most people (and easy enough to keep up with). I schedule my content so that readers looking for specific topics can know that I’ll be talking to *them* on certain days…and can schedule their blog-reading time accordingly. I also try to keep my posts at no more than 800 – 1k words. When people know what to expect from your blog and when, it’s a great way to foster efficient…

Networking

Once you have a blog, it’s time to get out there and meet other bloggers. The best way to do that is to…read blogs. Simple, right? It is the most time consuming part of networking though (in my opinion). There are many ways to do this efficiently – you just need to play around with different methods until you find something that works.

I recommend that you get comfortable with using “feeds”. A feed is just a file of your latest post (or posts) without all the blog “wrapping” around it. Think of it as choosing the “text” version of a newsletter rather than the html version. When someone “subscribes” to your site either using a reader or email, this is what they’re getting. And it’s the first thing you should do when you stumble over a blog you find interesting enough to visit more than once – subscribe to the feed. I find it’s more efficient than using bookmarks and visiting each blog if you follow a lot of blogs, like I do.

Many blogs offer the Google friend connect widget – you “follow” a site, and you can either view the feed in your blogger dashboard, or in Google reader (it goes there automatically). The “Networked Blogs” widget pulls blog feeds into your Facebook page so they show up on your home page, and there are many, many other feed readers you can use (I’ve been playing with Bloglines recently). All blogs should have a subscribe button of some sort (including yours!). If you subscribe to a feed using your email address, you’ll be emailed whenever that blog has a new post. I haven’t played much with that, as I have enough email coming into my various accounts.

Feed readers are fabulous in that you can scroll through the day’s posts quickly all in one spot. What I’ve been doing is scrolling through, marking “keep as unread” for the entries that look interesting or that I want to comment on, and then marking the rest “read”. Then when I have time I go back through the posts left on the main page, and read/visit as I have time. As a web designer/developer, I missed seeing the blog layouts though. So my “regular reads” are all listed on my blogroll, and I check those daily as I have time. I have them listed by the last post (using the feed – it’s a blogger widget), so I know the blogs at the top have recent updates. I visit each one as they come to the top of the list. It’s not nearly as efficient as using a feed reader, but I like the experience. All blogs start out in my feed reader…when I find myself visiting and commenting regularly, they get moved to the blogroll (and vice versa).

I don't do reciprocal follows or comments. If I comment on a blog, it's because that particular post interested me. If I follow a blog, it's because I'm interested in the content - not because the blog owner followed or visited me. I do visit the blogs of first-time commenters here, just to see if I might be interested in following, and I read the comments in posts I like on other blogs to find other people to connect with (even if I'm not commenting there myself). I follow links from other blog posts, and from other social networks and find many blogs that way. I try to make a few new connections each week to people I'm genuinely interested in...but in doing so, I'm getting my name out there. And by providing content that I hope is interesting and/or entertaining, I'm "branding" myself by my blog when someone clicks on my profile to see "who I am" after that initial contact.

How do you organize your blog reading/commenting? Do you use feed readers, or do you have some other method of keeping track? Do you make a conscious effort to connect with other bloggers? 

Next week: Blog reading, writing and networking tip sheet.

Construction Zone: Writing Efficiently

Tuesday, March 2, 2010

I’ve made no secret of the fact that my goal is to be able to write approximately four novels a year when I finally get my particular writing methods all worked out. Don’t look at me like I’m insane – many authors are already doing just that (or more). I’m convinced that if I pay attention to how my brain “works” when faced with the different aspects of writing, and then using that knowledge to create the most efficient method of drafting, revising and line-editing a manuscript, I will be able to figure out the most efficient way (for me) of writing at that pace. Yes, I’m aware that I have a tendency to over think...well, everything. In this case though, I’m pretty sure I can put my analytical nature to work in a very productive...and maybe even lucrative way.

To that end, I’ve kind of created my own little experiment. One of my goals with Indelibly Inked, my serial novel this time around is to post cleaner material – ie, not first draft. I’m okay with it still needing work, but I’m making a focused effort to edit each chapter as I write it (and when I have time, to go over it again before posting, though that hasn’t been happening). Of course I also have my dedicated revisions for Her Private Chef going on, and the first draft of Hearts on Trial. A little of everything, really.

I’m paying extremely close attention to detail with each serial chapter of Indelibly Inked (or trying to). When I say I’m editing as I go, it’s not just word choice and phrasing (line-edits), I’m also really working hard to make sure all the plot details – wardrobe, sets, transitions, character traits, etc – flow from one scene to the next without getting dropped, lost or bastardized in some way. Because I’m horrible at noting those things, this entails quite a lot of looking back through past scenes to remind myself what happened where, and whether or not I mentioned something already or if it’s yet to be addressed. It’s more work than just typing along carefree, but I find I’m enjoying it, even when I don’t anticipate the turn my readers choose for the next chapter.

I try *not* to do that with the HOT draft – though I catch myself wanting to all the time. I try to just start typing and go, not looking back at anything previously written. I rely on memory and the revisions I’ll do later to “fix” whatever I screw up in the first draft. It’s somewhat quicker as far as getting the story down goes (though not lately), but frustrating sometimes too when I *know* something goes in wrong and that it will have to be fixed later because I can’t remember the “right” thing.

Then there are my revisions to HPC. I purposefully picked my best “bad” draft to date for learning to revise with, figuring that if I could revise this particular draft, the next ones will be easier just because they aren’t as “broken”. Call me masochistic (at least I didn’t pick the worst one to learn on). Now that I’ve gotten over my apprehension, self-doubt and overall fear of learning to revise, I’m finding that it takes about as long to revise/rewrite a scene in HPC as it does to carefully draft a chapter (scene, really) for Indelibly Inked. And my revisions to HPC are mainly about fixing mistakes that I’m simply not making as many of using the more detail-oriented draft method

Conclusions for my own personal writing style:

- Writing a carefully crafted first draft doesn’t take much more time than a sloppy one.

- Revisions would be considerably easier and faster if I wasn't fixing so many "major" problems.

- It's difficult to switch between editing mode and "fast drafting" mode...much easier to switch from editing mode to "careful drafting" mode.

- "Careful drafting" goes faster the more I do of it (and would probably go even fast if I made use of the note features in yWriter to keep track of little details and plot threads).

So for the next couple weeks, I'm going to try applying the "careful drafting" style to my HOT draft, and see how it goes. If I can get 500 words per day done, that's 3500 per week - doable I think with the concurrent revisions to HPC (and twice the pace I wrote HPC at).

Are you a fast drafter or a "careful" drafter? Have you analyzed your writing style for efficiency? Or do you just write, and not worry about how it happens?

Goals for the Week 3/1/10

Monday, March 1, 2010

It's March! I should look back at last week's goals for comparison, but I'm not going to this time. I'm going to let this week start fresh, and just jump in right where I'm at. This week - this week is going to be good, organized and very productive. Because I say so.

Weekly Goals

Writing

- 1st chapter revised for Her Private Chef. Yes, the whole thing. No more messing around.
- 2k more new words drafted for Hearts on Trial. Even if I have to sneak them in...uh...somewhere.
- 9th lesson for revision course (look through, use what I need)
- Chapter 9 of Indelibly Inked

Personal

- Laundry. Keep up with it.
- Workouts. Do them.
- Get the greenhouse going and the flowers situated out there.
- Update my gardening blog.
- Make vet appt. for Gabriel, confirm Lucy's, and order B12 pills for Lucy to try (would replace the shots, woot!)
- Get those writing goals done!

That's it for me - and plenty, I'm sure. What's your major goal this week? Read anything good lately?